January 1st, 2004

userinfo senji
2004/01/01 18:57:00 - Drabble for meallanmouse
OK, meallanmouse didn't actually ask for this, but it was her one that she did for me that provided the initial half-thought, and it needed doing.

Also, it's infinitely better than it was originally thanks to angelofthenorth who sort of turned the structure inside-out and made it work (and deserves most of the credit).

Title: Strangely Drawn
Pairing: Remus/Luna

His pen adds to the clouds surrounding the moon. Not to obliterate, just... He realises he really has been staring at that same sheet of paper for 15 minutes.

She is not an expected problem, then, this second year. Even a Ravenclaw would seldom want a longer list of the dark and the dangerous, an ethereal dreaminess of unrealistic expectation. He smiles.

A second year to whom he feels strange attraction. A student he feels compelled to observe, to annotate. Not a problem he expects, as teacher.

Then neither was Sirius; yet they both crept up to redraw his world.

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userinfo meallanmouse
2004/01/01 12:23:18

:: purrs ::

I very much like that last sentence too. Very much so.
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userinfo enismirdal
2004/01/01 12:58:29
Oooooh! I like these drabble-thingys. They're nice, all sort of intense emotion encapsulated into a couple of paragraphs. I'm going to have to try one sometime...
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userinfo ashesofautumn
2004/04/08 11:34:57
(Read this after you sent me here through mctabby's entry's comments.. er, you know what I mean.)

Very nice! It's really difficult to manage to do drabbles well, since you have to fit everything in a very small amount of words, but you did this one very well!

I really liked the last line.

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